On Pilgrimage — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

a morning-fresh aroma from the compost steaming in the cool air

i descend the mountain just so i can climb it yet again

through fog as soft as the moss acorns clattering down

the sun’s already out in the valley for the annual farm show

and above the gap the first broad-winged hawks of the day

spiral high around a column of rising heat then hurtle south

while a long rumbling line of tractors snakes through the fields

they used to say rogation was good for the crops

even bullshit walks on six legs bit by bit into the earth

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The speaker walks up and down a mountain on an autumn morning, noticing small things as they go: steam rising from compost, acorns clattering down, hawks circling in a thermal before heading south. Below, a farm show is under way, and a line of tractors rumbles through the fields. The walk is called a pilgrimage, and the line about descending "just so I can climb it yet again" suggests the point is the repeating, not the arrival.

The mood is calm and observant, with a dry joke near the end. The speaker recalls that people once said rogation, a custom of blessing the land and asking for good crops, helped the harvest. Then comes the blunt line about "bullshit" walking "on six legs" into the earth. The image is odd, but it seems to say that old claims, like insects, slowly return to the soil. The speaker doesn't sound bitter, though. Watching the world carry on is its own kind of blessing.

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