Spring snow: sixteen snapshots — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

Spring snow: the night before, I woke to the sound of swans

Spring snow: the spicebush outside my window captures more & more of the sky

Spring snow: one mourning dove adds an extra half-note

Spring snow: the soft ground sinks under my boots

Spring snow: last year’s stalks of Oswego tea don fresh caps

Spring snow: whitewashed walls of a springhouse look anything but white

Spring snow clinging to every twig trunks glow green with lichen

Spring snow: the black cat crouches beside a vole’s burrow

Spring snow on budding maples: faint blush of pink

Spring snow covers up the letters on a “No Trespassing” sign

Spring snow: the woods won’t be this dark again until early summer

Spring snow: soft thumps as it drops off the trees, water loud in the creek

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Dave Bonta's poem is a series of small, separate observations, all made during one spring snowfall. Each stanza opens with the same two words, "Spring snow," then turns to a new detail: swans heard in the night, a dove's extra note, boots sinking into soft ground, a black cat crouched near a vole's burrow. The speaker seems to be walking and watching, paying close attention to what the snow changes, whether it's the color of a whitewashed wall or the sound of the woods.

The mood is quiet and curious, and the speaker sounds more delighted than bothered by the unseasonable weather. Spring's signs, like budding maples with a "faint blush of pink," show through the white. One small moment stands out: snow covers the letters on a "No Trespassing" sign, as if the weather briefly softens human boundaries. The ending, with snow thumping from branches and the creek running loud, suggests the snow is already on its way out.

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