Goldenrod Time — Summary

the meadow at dawn gives birth to ghosts:

slow dancers of fog beneath a crescent moon

that’s just been deserted by its entourage of stars

the goldenrod’s dark gold mellows to yellow

a whole 30-acre bowl of it between wooded ridges

where the sun comes as a parishioner

among the monarchs and the green darners

and later the lopper with its steel grin

as i clearcut black locusts infiltrating the goldenrod

enjoying their shade even as i destroy it

there’s a cool breeze from the heart of the sky

now that night and day are nearly equal

happiness appears in the form of small clouds

suspended just out of reach

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Dave Bonta's poem follows one day in a large meadow at the turn of summer into autumn. It opens at dawn, with fog rising like ghosts beneath a thin moon, and the goldenrod slowly brightening as light arrives. The sun is pictured as a quiet churchgoer, and the butterflies and dragonflies feel like a congregation, so the whole place takes on a sacred air.

Then the speaker steps in, cutting down black locusts that are creeping into the meadow. The tool's "steel grin" is a sharp, slightly uneasy image. He admits he enjoys the trees' shade even as he destroys it, which shows a mix of duty and regret rather than simple satisfaction.

The ending settles into calm. A cool breeze arrives, day and night are nearly equal, and happiness shows up as small clouds hanging just out of reach. The mood is peaceful and observant, with a gentle ache in it: contentment here is something you glimpse and can't quite hold.

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