Tropical Depression — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

what faceless bureaucrat wears so gray a uniform

gray as the paper mask inhabited by hornets

molded in a spiral around its single dire orifice

a sump that swallows all assumptions

an eyehole that shuts like some toddler god

thinking we’ll all just vanish under sheets of rain

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The poem is a string of questions and images that all circle one thing: a tropical storm, pictured as a system rather than a person. It begins by asking what kind of faceless bureaucrat would wear such a gray uniform, and the answer slides into a hornet's nest, a paper mask with a single dark opening. That opening is the storm's eye, which the poem calls a sump swallowing all assumptions. Whatever we thought we knew about safety or control drains away into it.

The speaker's feeling seems to be uneasy awe, mixed with a dry, almost sardonic humor. Comparing the eye to a toddler god is both funny and chilling: a power that is huge, careless, and childishly sure that we will simply disappear under the rain. The mood is gray, tense, and a little bleak. The storm has no malice and no plan, which somehow makes it worse. It is indifferent, like paperwork that can't be argued with.

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