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Dave BontaContemplative

day breaks like a wishbone how lucky

that the longer portion remains with us in darkness

under the interstate in that dull interminable thunder

a school of salmon- colored leaves stream down

from trees given scraps of now- worthless land

a cylindrical concrete pier is tree enough for virginia creeper

its forked tendrils its scarlet molt a bit of fox grape

and now for a fish crow’s falsetto caw

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Dave Bonta's poem starts with a small, odd image: the day breaks like a wishbone. The speaker jokes that we're lucky, because the bigger half stays with us, and that half is "darkness." It's a wry, slightly dim kind of optimism, as if dawn only partly wins.

From there the poem moves to a spot beneath an interstate, where traffic makes a "dull interminable thunder." Even here, nature carries on. Leaves fall like a school of salmon-colored fish, the trees stand on scraps of land nobody wants, and a concrete pier becomes "tree enough" for a creeper vine with scarlet leaves and a few fox grapes.

The speaker doesn't complain about the setting. Instead they watch closely and seem quietly delighted, even amused. The last lines, "and now for / a fish crow's / falsetto caw," sound like an announcer introducing a performer. The mood is calm, observant, and gently humorous, finding small beauty and resilience in a neglected, noisy place.

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