Inside Out — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

the forest is like a house emptied by burglars

when i am old i hope to be this free and open

with fire stolen from the sun

but where have all the caterpillars gone

hungry hungry

long time passing they’re all in uniform

and dormant now overwintering as sex machines

hemolymph flooded with glycerol so ice won’t form

or lying dead in the leaf duff wings neatly folded

with somewhere an egg small as the dot of an i

waiting for spring’s open sesame

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The poem opens with a striking image: a winter forest looks like a house emptied by burglars. The leaves are gone, the branches are bare, and everything seems stripped. The speaker, though, finds something appealing in that openness and hopes to be "this free and open" in old age. The "fire stolen from the sun" suggests the lost warmth and color of autumn.

Then a question breaks in: where have all the caterpillars gone? The rest of the poem answers it. They haven't vanished. Some are dormant, protected by glycerol in their blood so ice can't form. Some lie dead in the leaf litter, wings neatly folded. Somewhere, an egg "small as the dot of an i" is waiting.

The mood shifts from bareness and loss to quiet, curious hope. The speaker sounds observant and a little wry, and the poem ends on "open sesame," treating spring as a magic word that will unlock the emptied house again.

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