On Night Watch — Summary

the moon over my shoulder is already half-lit

i turn my hand palm-up it fills with starlight

flying squirrels scold in an ethereal key

i’m sitting beneath their favorite mother oak

i take a deep breath of autumn soil fragrance

a whitetail buck grunts more as if in pain than in lust

there’s a thunder of hooves then nothing

a dead leaf drops into my hand

the trees continue their strategic withdrawal

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A speaker sits alone in the woods at night, quiet enough that the forest forgets to be wary of them. Almost everything here is observed rather than explained: a half-lit moon, starlight pooling in an open palm, flying squirrels chattering overhead, the smell of damp autumn soil. The speaker seems relaxed and attentive, taking it all in with a deep breath.

Then the mood shifts. The buck's grunt sounds pained, not aggressive, and a sudden thunder of hooves ends in silence. A single dead leaf landing in the speaker's hand feels like a small, quiet gift, but also a reminder that the season is turning. The final image, trees continuing their "strategic withdrawal," is playful and a little wry, comparing the leaves' fall to a retreating army. Overall the poem feels hushed and observant, tender toward nature, with a gentle awareness of endings underneath.

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