Into the Open — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

an empty space is still data my phone reminds me

no space is truly empty a falling leaf reminds me

the time of long shadows has come ‘round again

cedar waxwings whistle through bare branches

the low sun catches on wings in lieu of leaves

rests in a red oak undressing in the wind

and flickers like an angel resisting temptation

to follow the leaves down spinning spiralling

or rocking back and forth like a cradle

if only i could sleep and leaf out when i wake

clinging to hope makes us as empty as the future

let the earth take its own sweet time

let this glory be enough

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Dave Bonta's poem watches late autumn arrive and slowly turns that watching into a way of accepting loss. It begins with two small reminders: a phone says an empty space still holds data, and a falling leaf suggests nothing is truly empty. From there the speaker settles into the season of long shadows, with cedar waxwings moving through bare branches and low sunlight catching on their wings where leaves used to be. The sun resting in a red oak becomes an angel who resists the urge to follow the leaves down.

The speaker's feeling shifts from wistfulness to something calmer. There is a brief wish to sleep through winter and "leaf out" again on waking, but the poem then admits that clinging to hope leaves us as empty as the future. The ending lets go: let the earth take its time, and let the present glory be enough. The mood is quiet, reflective and gently consoling, finding fullness in what looks like emptiness.

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