Time Lines — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

and the deer came on long legs between the trees

and clashed antlers with a sound old and dry as the wind

gnats danced as if summer had returned

for one day only everything must go

through a gray mist that may have been in my head

i measured the mountain with my body pacing it out

i walked among birches nothing but blank pages

overtook milkweed giving birth to clouds

looped past the wild gravevines their convolutions laid bare

following the bed of an old coal railroad

with the leaves mostly down saw far below

the remains of a car wheels-up among deer-tongue grass

abandoned halfway through the age of fishes

when seas saved the mud of ancestral mountains

for 62 million years until a mass extinction

getting younger as i climbed

into the age of amphibians and giant dragonflies

pressed into rock by later layers now sloughed off

and the horizon opened like a rose on ever more mountains

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A walker heads up a mountain in late autumn and, as the poem goes, the landscape keeps opening onto much older ones. At first the details are small and immediate: deer clashing antlers, gnats dancing as if summer had come back, a mist the speaker admits might be "in my head." The speaker paces out the mountain with their body, and the birches, like "blank pages," suggest a mind ready to be written on.

Then the poem shifts. An old coal railroad bed and a wrecked car below lead the speaker to think about geology: seas, mud, mass extinction, the age of amphibians and giant dragonflies. Climbing becomes a kind of time travel, and the speaker grows "younger" as they rise through the layers.

The mood is quiet, curious, and humbled, but not gloomy. Loss and abandonment are there, yet the ending lifts. The horizon opens "like a rose" onto "ever more mountains," a sense of wonder at how much time the land holds.

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