Sinking Valley — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

the longer you gaze at the face of a limestone cliff

the more beasts begin to emerge

a puzzle of muzzles a marl of snarls

don’t call them angelic they’re not here for you

convening as if to meditate on a corpse

where the creek makes a brief above-ground appearance

oh white-breasted nuthatch with your anxiety song

who’s to say what’s real in a valley full of sinkholes

bare trees are brooms for this bitter wind to ride

right into the earth vibrating where they live

red cedars giving shelter to juncos

a locust still ornately thorned against mastodons

threadbare hemlocks unaccustomed to so much sun

i follow the groundwater back underground

and my glasses fog up in less than 50 feet

the creek has gained echoey voices

that may or may not be cave divers

drowned in pursuit of an inner space

hidden from the sun: a grove of impossible trees

stems said to be slender as drinking straws

having long ago met their better halves

growing down as they grew up

i emerge shivering into the frigid sunlight

the cliff is empty i come to no conclusions

at the next farm a hundred goats

graze their pasture down to the nubbins

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A walker studies a limestone cliff and finds animal faces forming in the rock, snarling and crowded together like mourners around a body. The speaker warns that these aren't angels and aren't there for us. From there the poem moves through a winter landscape of bare trees, cedars, juncos and a nervous nuthatch, while the question "who's to say what's real" hangs over a valley riddled with sinkholes.

Then the speaker follows the creek underground. Fogged glasses and echoing voices, which might belong to drowned cave divers, turn the walk into something stranger. The image of trees growing downward, mirroring those above, suggests a hidden world under the surface.

The mood is curious, uneasy and quietly humble. The speaker comes back out shivering, with the cliff empty again and "no conclusions." The closing goats, grazing the pasture to the nubbins, bring us back to plain, bare, everyday life.

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