Self-Verification — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

old gray body bound for no grave

for no grave has issued us visas

and i am a law- abiding citizen

which is to say i suppose the law is my abode

so this carcass of mine has standing

and grows more and more abstract

taxed and insured vaccinated and boosted

password-protected two-factor authenticated

but is it bound for glory i could use a ride

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A body gets processed far more thoroughly than it gets understood. That is the quiet joke, and the quiet grief, of Dave Bonta's "Self-Verification." The speaker is old, "gray," and apparently headed nowhere in particular. Death offers no destination, because "no grave / has issued us visas." Death is imagined as a country with a border, and the speaker has the wrong paperwork. Meanwhile he is a "law-abiding citizen," fully registered in the only jurisdiction that will have him. The poem asks what is left of a person once every part of him has been verified, and it answers with a small, plain request for help.

The title shows the poem's method. "Self-verification" sounds like a login screen, yet it also names an old human question: how do I prove I'm here, and what for? The poem keeps both senses going. Its vocabulary comes from forms and portals: "visas," "citizen," "standing," "taxed and insured," "vaccinated and boosted," "password-protected," "two-factor authenticated." Almost none of these words describe a living person. They describe what institutions do to a person, and the grammar agrees. The participles in the list are passive, so the speaker is something these things happen to.

Wordplay does much of the work. The line break in "law- / abiding" leaves "law" stranded at the end of a line, and the next stanza turns the idiom into something close to housing: "the law is my abode." Abiding and abode come from the same root, so the speaker lives inside the law the way a snail lives in its shell. Then comes "so this carcass of mine / has standing." Standing is a legal term for the right to be heard in court, and it is also what a body physically does. Applying it to a "carcass" is grimly funny. The body is a corpse-in-waiting, yet it counts. The repeated "bound" works the same way. In the opening it means headed toward, and it also quietly suggests tied up, held by obligations. By the end the double meaning has become the poem's whole predicament.

The form is plain and sly. There are nine couplets, no capitals, no punctuation and no end rhyme. The stanzas are linked by repetition instead: "bound for no grave" is picked up as "for no grave," so each thought hands itself to the next like a chain of forms passed between desks. The question in the last stanza, "but is it bound for glory," carries no question mark, which fits the poem's flat, murmured tone. Sound does the work rhyme might have done. "Old gray body" and "bound" lean on the soft b and the long vowels, and "taxed" and "abstract" share a clipped, consonant-heavy snap that feels administrative.

The rhythm tightens and then lets go. The penultimate couplet piles up syllables in long words like "password-protected" and "authenticated," and the lines clot with the same bureaucratic fuss they describe. After that, "but is it bound for glory / i could use a ride" drops into short, mostly one-syllable words. "Bound for glory" is a familiar phrase from gospel and folk song, so it brings a hint of old-time hope into a poem otherwise full of account security. The speaker's answer to it sounds like a tired traveler at the roadside with a thumb out. "I could use a ride" is conversational, a little embarrassed and entirely sincere.

That swerve is where the poem's significance lies. It could have been a simple satire of modern bureaucracy, and the jokes about passwords would be enough for that. But the body that "grows more / and more abstract" is also the speaker's own, and the poem lets some real fear show through the wit. Every system listed can confirm that he exists. None can say where he is going or whether anything waits at the end of the line. The final couplet doesn't claim an answer, and it also doesn't fake a rebellion against the paperwork. The speaker asks, humbly and in lowercase, for the one thing no office has issued, which is a way forward. Nothing here needs a biography to land. The poem carries its own papers and finds that they aren't enough.

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