Flock — Summary

Drank my morning quiet and my noon-time stew: a study for a ring for a wedding for old soldiers in the dark in the park where a far flock played.

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Dave Bonta's three lines read like a snapshot of one ordinary day that slowly drifts into something dreamlike. The speaker starts with plain, homely details: a "morning quiet" and a "noon-time stew," as if silence were something you could drink and a meal were a marker of time passing. Then the language loosens. A "study for a ring for a wedding for old soldiers" stacks one phrase onto the next, so the thought seems to wander further each time, from a sketch or rehearsal to a ring, then a wedding, then veterans.

The poem never explains how these pieces fit together, and that is part of its effect. The sound of the last line, with its echoing "dark," "park," and "far," pulls us into a hazy, hushed scene where a flock plays at a distance. We can't tell whether it is birds, animals, or people. The mood is calm, a little mysterious, and gently melancholy, like a half-remembered thought drifting by at the edge of sleep.

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