Burden — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

In the morning at my lute the carrier will carry to the carrier oranges and two barrels of sun sake and sack, lamb and veal a pocket to carry in his pocket after supper at my flute

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Read quickly, the poem sounds like a delivery order: oranges, two barrels of sun, sake, sack, lamb, veal. A carrier is meant to take these goods to another carrier, and the whole thing is framed by two moments of music, the morning "at my lute" and the evening "at my flute." The logic is more playful than practical, though. Words keep echoing each other, as in "carrier," "carry," and "carrier" again, and lute chimes with flute. The "pocket to carry in his pocket" loops back on itself like a riddle.

The speaker doesn't sound anxious about the load. The tone feels relaxed and a little amused, even content. Food, drink, and sunlight are treated as equally real, so an ordinary errand becomes a small feast. The title "Burden" hints at weight, but the sounds are light and musical. The mood is sunny and abundant, as if the day's work and its pleasures were just one long, tuneful passing-along.

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