The mother — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

Right at dusk the mother bear leads her cubs down to the edge of the woods & stops, hearing a screen door ease open, smelling trouble.

My grossly unequal nose picks up nothing of her musk or the sweet milk oozing from well-bit nipples. My primate eyes are made for the colors of day, not shades of darkness. I peer into every shadow between the trees, each clot of night.

The space between us fills with explosions of breath: HUH. HUH. I hear claws on tree trunks & small things running through the brush. When the mother clacks her teeth, I hear the dangerous size of her in that hollow TOCK TOCK TOCK.

I lean out over the porch rail, listening, naked from the waist up. A mosquito whines in my ear. The fireflies, as usual, illuminate nothing.

The next morning, when I go to look, every rock on the hillside has been moved from its bed.

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A man stands on his porch at dusk, half-dressed, aware that a mother bear and her cubs have come to the edge of the woods. She has sensed him, and he is trying to sense her. But he feels badly equipped. His nose is "grossly unequal" to hers, and his "primate eyes" are no good in the dark, so he has to rely on hearing: the huffing breaths, claws on bark, and the hollow clacking of her teeth, which tells him how big she is.

The mood is tense but also humble. The speaker is close to a wild animal and can barely perceive her. Even the fireflies "illuminate nothing." The ordinary details, like the mosquito and the screen door, make the moment feel real. The ending is quietly startling. In daylight, he finds every rock on the hillside overturned. The bear was searching all along, and the speaker only sees the evidence once she has gone.

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