(De)composition — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

death is a miracle making in the body (that is not finished) most rare things

how could it be locked up between two hopes

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Parentheses usually hold something minor, an aside the writer could have left out. In Dave Bonta's poem they turn up twice, and both times they carry the weight. The first is in the title. Take away the bracketed "De" and what remains is "composition", so the word for falling apart contains the word for putting together. A composition is also a piece of music, a poem, a mixture of elements. Before the first line begins, the title has already suggested the poem's argument: decay is a kind of making.

The opening lines state that argument flatly: "death is a miracle / making in the body ... most rare things." There is no sentimentality here and no comfort-card vocabulary. Death is not called peaceful or tragic. It is a maker, and the body is its workshop. The word "rare" is the surprise. We expect it to describe precious things that death destroys, yet here death produces them. The poem never says what these rare things are. That silence is worth noticing. Judging by the imagery, they could be literal (the body's matter turning into something else) or figurative (memories, meanings, the strange attention we pay to a life once it is over). By leaving them unnamed, the poem lets the reader fill the space.

The second parenthesis, "(that is not finished)", is the hinge of the poem. Grammatically it interrupts the sentence, and that interruption makes line two the longest in the poem, as though the line itself were stretched by unfinished business. We tend to think of the body as complete until death breaks it. The poem quietly reverses this. The body is still in progress, and death is another stage of the work, not its end. The aside is whispered, but it changes how everything around it reads.

The second stanza turns from statement to question: "how could it be locked up / between two hopes." There is no question mark, so the line reads less like a request for information than like incredulity, or a challenge. The verb "locked up" belongs to prisons, coffins and vaults, and the poem sets it against the idea of a miracle that cannot be confined. What are the "two hopes"? The text does not say. One reading is the hope that comes before death and the hope that follows it. Another is hope for life and hope for something beyond it. The phrase also echoes the poem's shape: two hopes enclosing death look a lot like two parentheses enclosing a word. The poem suggests that such brackets are too small to hold what is inside them.

The sound and form support this. There is no rhyme, no capital letters and no punctuation except the brackets, so the thought never snaps shut with a full stop. The poem ends on "hopes", an open word that leaves the breath hanging. The first stanza has three lines and the second only two, and one can read that shrinking as the poem thinning out, composing itself and letting itself go at once. The vocabulary is plain, mostly one-syllable words, but "miracle" is the exception and stands out. Its soft m is picked up in "making" and "most", which gives the opening a low murmur, like a private remark rather than a pronouncement.

What makes the poem significant is how much it does in about two dozen words. It does not promise heaven, and it does not give in to despair. It holds a third position, which is wonder. Death here is neither an enemy nor a comfort but a process that makes things, and the body is something still being made, never a finished object. A student might ask whether that is consoling or unsettling, and the poem is built so that both answers feel possible. The title, the brackets and the unpunctuated ending all say the same thing: neither life nor death can be fully contained, even by the poem's own small enclosures.

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