Timekeeper — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

Time gone, I fell upon boring holes in the clock and calling it chance, keeping a month or two with me like water in a boat, black with every particular of home. I observed the fanatics who cry up death say they will not pay for time, like a road when we have no money for ordinary dirt. Building my house a story higher, saving light, I long to see time heal.

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Dave Bonta's "Timekeeper" is about trying to hold onto time after it has slipped away, and about wanting that time to mend something. The speaker starts by tampering with the clock, boring holes in it and calling the result chance, as if breaking the machine might loosen its grip. Then comes the image of keeping a month or two "like water in a boat": the speaker carries the past around, but it threatens to sink them. It is also "black with every particular of home," so what's stored up seems heavy with memory and perhaps grief.

The middle turns to "fanatics who cry up death," people who refuse to pay for time. The comparison to a road we can't afford, even though it's only "ordinary dirt," suggests time is something basic we shouldn't have to bargain for. The ending is quieter. The speaker builds the house higher and saves light, a patient, practical gesture, and admits a simple longing: "to see time heal." The mood is wistful and strange, uneasy but ultimately hopeful.

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