Surveillance — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

inching over the house like a staircase the crow spent the morning looking in on us and our paper our melancholy milk

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A crow spends the morning moving slowly across a house, and the speaker feels watched. The opening image is odd and precise: the bird inches along "like a staircase," step by step, each hop climbing or descending the roof's angles. It is patient and unhurried, and that patience makes it a little unnerving.

The crow isn't just passing by. It is "looking in on us," as if checking up on the household, and the title, "Surveillance," makes that feeling explicit. What it sees is small and ordinary: the newspaper and the milk. Calling the milk "melancholy" is the poem's quiet surprise. The sadness seems to belong to the people in the house, spilling onto the things around them, or perhaps the bird's gaze makes the whole scene feel gloomier.

The mood is dry, slightly eerie, and gently humorous. The speaker doesn't panic. They just notice how exposed an ordinary, low-spirited morning can feel when something outside is watching it.

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