Digger — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

West wind on the marsh. A general in the wars out getting vines to pot.

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Three short lines are enough to bring a whole character into view: grand in title, ordinary in errand. Dave Bonta's "Digger" gives us a windy marsh, a "general in the wars," and a job about as small as jobs get: "getting vines to pot." The central idea is the collision between the scale of a military career and the scale of a household chore. The poem lets that collision be gently funny and quietly moving at once, and it never tells us which to feel.

The grammar explains the mood. There is not a single finite verb in the poem. "West wind on the marsh" is a bare scene, a glance across a field. The second and third lines run together into one fragment, "A general in the wars / out getting vines to pot," with the missing "is" that would make it a proper sentence. The effect is of something seen and jotted down on the spot. The participle "getting" keeps the action unfinished, so the general is forever halfway through his errand. The line break after "wars" has no punctuation, so the sentence tips over the edge and lands on "pot." We hang for a beat on the word "wars" and then drop into the garden.

The shape is close to a haiku. The lines run to five, seven and six syllables, so the last line spills one syllable past the traditional pattern, as if the poem could not quite stay tidy. Like many haiku, it opens with weather and place, then brings in a human figure. There is no rhyme, but the sound is carefully handled. The *w* of "West wind" carries into "wars," so the first two lines seem to blow along together. Then the soft *g* of "general" gives way to the hard *g* of "getting," the same letter pronounced differently, as if rank were being swapped for labour. The poem closes on "pot," a flat, clipped syllable that stops the sentence like a lid.

The word choices carry most of the meaning. "In the wars" has a second sense in British English, where "to have been in the wars" means to be battered or bruised. The phrase can describe a veteran, and it can just as easily describe someone who looks worn out. The title adds another layer. A digger is someone who digs, and the word is also slang for a soldier in Australian and New Zealand usage. Trenches are dug as well as gardens. The title names the figure by his labour, while the text names him by his rank, and the gap between the two names is where the poem lives. One is what the world called him, the other is what he is doing now.

"Pot" is a small word with some history behind it. To pot a plant is to bring something wild into a container. The marsh vines are taken from open ground and settled indoors, which may quietly echo a soldier being brought home. The idiom "gone to pot," meaning gone to ruin, may also flicker behind the line. That reading is my inference, since the poem never says it. But the literal pot and the idiomatic one sit close enough to give the line a faint ache beneath the humour. The marsh is also a well-chosen setting. It is neither firm land nor open water, a place where boundaries blur, and a fitting place to find someone between identities. The west wind is given no purpose at all. It blows across the marsh whatever anyone's rank.

What the poem leaves out matters as much as what it includes. We cannot tell whether the "general" is a real veteran, a nickname for an old neighbour, or a figure of speech. Nothing says whether the potting is rest, recovery or penance, or whether the speaker admires the man or smiles at him. Because the poem passes no judgment, the reader has to supply the history, and the story each reader supplies says something about what they expect war to leave behind.

That economy is what makes "Digger" worth reading. It shows how much a few plain words can hold when they are placed well. A reader who slows down finds a whole life behind the glimpse, with its authority and damage and its ordinary Tuesday morning. The poem does not shout about the distance between a general and a gardener. It lets the wind blow over it and goes back to the vines.

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