Living Large — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

I take leave of trouble with a dinner of oats, get one window to the sea and another to the deck like a king.

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Five short lines, one sentence, and a whole theory of wealth tucked inside. Dave Bonta's "Living Large" takes a phrase usually attached to champagne and penthouses and tests it against a bowl of oats. The speaker claims to live like a king, and the evidence is a modest supper and a room with two windows. The poem's central idea is that richness is a matter of attention and ease, not of possessions. Trouble can be set aside, and a good view is enough to make an ordinary evening feel royal.

The title sets up an expectation that the first line begins to undermine. "Living large" promises excess, but the poem's actual luxuries are tiny. The key verb is "take leave," which has a courtly ring: it is what one does at the end of an audience, with a bow and a polite farewell. So trouble is treated as a visitor who has had his turn, not as an enemy to be defeated. It isn't banished or conquered, only excused. That gentleness gives the poem its tone. The speaker doesn't claim to have solved anything, only to have stepped away for the evening.

The oats are the poem's best joke and its best image. "Dinner" suggests the main event of the day, but oats are plain food, associated with porridge and breakfast. Setting the grand word against the humble thing is a small comic deflation. Yet the line also carries real contentment. The phrase "dinner of oats" has a rounded, soft sound (the long *o* in "oats" echoes the vowel in "of" only loosely, but the *d* of "dinner" returns later in "deck"), and the meal sounds warm and sufficient. The poem never apologizes for the food. Nothing in the language suggests the speaker is making do.

The second half turns outward. "Get one window to the sea / and another to the deck" is built on a neat doubling: "one" and "another," each with its own view. The sea offers distance and horizon, while the deck is close, practical, and presumably within reach. The poem doesn't say whether this is a house, a cabin, or a boat, so the "deck" could be a ship's or a porch, and that ambiguity lets readers furnish the place themselves. Judging by the imagery, though, the speaker's wealth is geometric: two openings that let the outside in. A king might own a kingdom, but this speaker owns two ways of looking at one.

The verb "get" matters too. It is casual and a little lucky, the word you'd use for scoring a good table at a restaurant, and it sits oddly beside "take leave." One verb is ceremonial and the other is breezy, and the mix captures the poem's attitude: it treats a small pleasure with a mock-formal sense of occasion, yet the pleasure is real.

Structurally, the poem relies on rhythm more than rhyme. There is no rhyme scheme, and the poem is free verse, but the lines have a quiet shape. The first four run six, six, seven and seven syllables, a gradual lengthening that feels like settling into a chair. Then comes "like a king," only three syllables, a sudden drop. The short last line works like a coronation or a curtain falling. It also has no period after it, so the poem simply stops, as if reluctant to close the door on the feeling. There is a pleasing ambiguity in the grammar as well: "like a king" could describe the getting of the windows, or the leave-taking itself, or the whole evening. It floats free of any one verb, and that looseness lets it color everything before it.

What makes the poem worth reading is how much it does with so little. In five lines it refuses the usual meaning of "living large" and replaces it with a quieter one, without lecturing about simplicity. Its humor keeps it from sounding smug, and the humor works because the speaker half means the boast. The poem suggests that to feel like a king, it may be enough to put your troubles down, eat something warm, and have somewhere good to look.

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