Skeptic — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

I hear the wind speak: nothing but epitaph, brass angels crying. The church, a poor man’s box that binds any guest to the dying light like some great weight. I go down to the water with my echo: to say is to know.

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Ten short lines are enough for Dave Bonta's "Skeptic" to stage a whole argument about belief. The speaker listens for meaning in the wind, in a church and in water, and each time what he gets back is something small, heavy or borrowed from himself. The title tells us how to read this. The skeptic is not someone who refuses to listen. He goes out, hears everything, and still declines to be consoled.

The poem opens with a promise of revelation: "I hear the wind speak." Wind has long stood for spirit or inspiration, so we expect a message. The next line deflates it. What the wind says is "nothing but epitaph," words that belong on a gravestone, the language of endings. The phrase "nothing but" does the skeptic's work in miniature, reducing the voice of nature to a single, grim function. The "brass angels crying" deepen the effect. The poem never says what they are. They could be weathervanes, bells or grave ornaments, though that is an inference from the metal and the wind. In every case the angels, usually messengers of comfort, are made of cold metal and can only cry. The sound is hard and mechanical, and the wind is playing it.

The church is given the most unflattering image of all: "a poor man's box." The phrase suggests a plain, cramped building, but "poor" can also mean inadequate, and "box" quietly hints at a coffin. Notice too how the b-sounds pile up across the opening lines in "brass," "box" and "binds." They give the passage a blunt, clanking quality that suits its subject. The church "binds any guest / to the dying light / like some great weight." Where we might expect a church to lift people up, this one holds them down. "Guest" is an odd, polite word for a worshipper, as if everyone who enters is simply visiting, and "any" makes the effect indiscriminate. The light they are tied to is already "dying." Faith here is not a door but a burden, and "weight" lands heavily as the closing word of the line.

Then the poem turns. "I go down to the water" is the only moment of real movement, and the direction, downward, feels like a retreat from the church's gloom and also a descent. Water, unlike the box, is open and moving, and the speaker takes with him only "my echo." The word is the poem's cleverest touch. An echo is a voice that returns to us unchanged, and the poem enacts this in its sound. "Echo" ends in the same vowel sound as the final word, "know," so the closing rhyme is itself an echo. Because an echo gives back the last word it hears, the poem ends on the very word the water would return.

That final line, "to say is to know," is set off by a colon, as if it were the conclusion the whole walk has been leading to. It can be read in two ways. It might be a quiet, stubborn confidence: the only knowledge available is what we can say aloud and hear confirmed, with no help from angels or churches. It might also be bitterly ironic, since an echo "knows" only what we have already told it, and speaking proves nothing. The poem never decides, and that refusal is skeptical in itself.

Formally, "Skeptic" is unrhymed free verse in short lines of roughly four to six syllables, with no stanza breaks. The lines fall one after another like measured steps, and the compression recalls haiku without following its rules. The syntax is plain and the vocabulary mostly one or two syllables, so that the few elaborate words, "epitaph" and "echo," stand out.

The poem matters because it presents doubt as a form of attention rather than cynicism. The speaker keeps listening, to the wind, the church and the water, and the poem's honesty lies in reporting what he actually hears. In a few lines it asks a question every reader eventually meets: when the usual sources of meaning go quiet, is the voice that answers back our own, and is that enough?

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