Soul Food — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

I eat a dish of mackerel and a cold heart. My heart supped with us and told us to take three shares apiece, which was very good.

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Six short lines, a plate of fish, and by the end the speaker's own heart is sitting at the table giving instructions. Dave Bonta's "Soul Food" starts with an ordinary meal and, almost without the reader noticing, turns it into something closer to a parable about generosity and about being fed by your own inner life.

The opening sentence is quietly startling. "I eat a dish of mackerel / and a cold heart" uses one verb for two very different objects, and the grammar treats them as equals, as if a heart were just another item on the menu. Mackerel is a humble, oily, everyday fish, so the meal begins plain. The cold heart can be read in two ways. It may be a literal cold organ on a plate, since hearts are eaten as food. It may also be the idiom of coldness, an emotional deadness the speaker is forced to swallow. The poem never chooses, and the double meaning makes the title's pun work. "Soul food" suggests a kind of cooking, but it also suggests nourishment for the spirit.

The surprise comes in the next sentence: "My heart supped with us." The heart is no longer food but a guest. The change is small but significant. In the first line it is "a cold heart," with an indefinite article, something anonymous. In the third it is "my heart," a possessive, and it is now alive, sociable, and able to speak. One reading is that the speaker's actual heart, warm and generous, sits down beside the cold one he is eating. Another is that eating the cold heart changes him, so that a colder self is consumed and a warmer one takes its place. The poem leaves both possibilities open.

A second shift happens in the pronouns. The poem begins with a solitary "I," but by line three there is an "us." No one is introduced, and we never learn who the companions are. A private meal has become communal without any announcement. The verb "supped" adds to this. It is an old-fashioned, slightly formal word, and it makes the scene feel ceremonial, perhaps faintly sacramental. Judging by the diction, the poem seems to be borrowing the atmosphere of shared holy meals, though it never says so directly.

Then the heart speaks, and what it says is oddly practical: "take / three shares apiece." Nothing here is abstract or sentimental. The heart's generosity is expressed as arithmetic, a surplus, three portions where one would be normal. This is the poem's central idea, that real warmth shows itself as abundance, as a willingness to give more than is fair, and that it does so in a plain, bodily way. The line break after "take" holds the instruction for a beat, so that the generous number arrives with a small sense of surprise.

The last line, "which was very good," is deliberately flat. It is six monosyllables, and its tone is almost childlike, like someone reporting that the dinner went well. The understatement keeps the poem from becoming pious. Because the speaker does not explain or moralise, the reader is left to feel why the meal was good. The phrase may faintly echo the old language of approval after a creation, but that is an inference, not something the poem insists on.

Formally, the poem is free verse with no rhyme, and the lines are short, most of them only three to five syllables. The vocabulary is almost entirely plain and one-syllable, so the one three-syllable word, "mackerel," stands out as the only bit of texture on an otherwise bare plate. Soft, hissing sounds run through the middle of the poem ("supped," "us," "shares," "apiece"), giving the lines a murmuring, table-talk quality. The end-stopped first sentence feels closed and cold, while the later lines run on from one to the next, a small formal image of a heart thawing and spilling over.

What makes "Soul Food" memorable is how much it does with so little. It takes the literal and figurative senses of "heart" and lets them share a table, and it turns an unkind idiom into a scene of surprising hospitality. In under forty words it suggests that the self can be both what we swallow and what feeds us, and that the best response to coldness may be to sit down and take a third helping.

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