Solar Flair — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

The upholsterer came to take furniture for the sun: a half moon, the king’s worn door and a silk clock.

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A single sentence, four lines and a pun in the title: "Solar Flair" gives us very little, and what it gives is strange. An upholsterer arrives "to take furniture for the sun," and the furniture turns out to be a "half moon," "the king's worn door" and "a silk clock." Nobody explains who the upholsterer is or why the sun needs a sitting room. The poem asks us to accept this the way we accept events in a dream or a fairy tale, and then to wonder what the sun is actually collecting.

The title is the first clue. "Flair" is a word about style, a knack for decoration, and it sits one vowel away from "flare," the violent eruption of light from the sun's surface. Read together, the two words turn a cosmic explosion into a matter of taste. The sun is not blasting out energy but redecorating, and the upholsterer, a tradesman who mends and covers soft things, serves as its interior designer. It is a gently comic idea that also makes the sun feel domestic and a little vain.

The three pieces of furniture are all things that measure or mark something. The moon measures months, and here it is only half of itself, a phase that is also the shape of a half-round table. The door belongs to a king, and its wear suggests that many people have passed through it and that royal authority has been rubbed thin. Judging by the imagery, "the king" may also nod to the old idea of a sun-king, a ruler who shines. If so, the sun is quietly taking over a rival's belongings. The clock measures hours, and it is made of silk, a material that drapes and slips and is meant for comfort rather than precision. Time, power and the night are each reduced to an object that can be carried out of the house, and the sun collects them all.

The grammar supports this reading. The first two items come with different articles. "A half moon" and "a silk clock" are indefinite, one of many such things. "The king's worn door" is definite and specific, as though we should already know which door it is. That small difference lends the poem a false confidence, like a story that begins in the middle. The past tense of "came" adds to the effect, since the line reads like a note from a longer tale in which the upholsterer's visit has already been settled.

The poem's sound is quiet but deliberate. There is no rhyme, and the lines run at roughly five, seven, seven and four syllables, so a faint pattern appears and then lets go. "Upholsterer" is a long, slow word that fills the first line, and the stress falls hard on "came" at the end. In the third line, "worn door" works almost as a rhyme, and the open vowel of "door" adds to the sense of an entrance that has been used too much. The hard "k" sounds in "king's," "silk" and "clock" echo one another across the last two lines, so that the final phrase, "a silk clock," sounds like something quietly clicking shut. It is also the shortest line. After the grander "half moon" and "king's worn door," the poem ends on something small, soft and domestic.

One more ambiguity keeps the poem open. "To take furniture for the sun" could mean taking it to the sun, taking it on the sun's behalf, or taking it away so the sun can have it. The preposition is slippery, and so is the question of whether the sun is being given something or robbed of it. The poem does not choose, and the uncertainty is part of its charm.

What makes it worth reading is how much it does with so little. In about a dozen words it sets up a small myth in which daylight consumes the markers of night, kings and hours, and it does so without any grand statement. The humor of the pun and the oddness of the objects keep the tone light, but the images linger: a half moon waiting to be sat upon, a door worn by long use, and a clock that has gone soft. The poem suggests that even the largest things, the sun and time itself, can be handled like household goods.

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