Sinking Valley — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

we climbed down to the birthplace of water

bloodroot wild ginger sang

roots stretched into crevasses

limestoned voices

inaudible over the gasp & suck a scum of flotsam in the gullet

we crouched in the sun blood-colored flowers

whitewater curling back & back we prayed for a rain of calcium

another sky opened impossibly high & thin

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The speaker and a companion descend into a landscape where water comes out of the earth, and the poem treats the trip almost like a pilgrimage. Everything is physical and close up: flowers growing from the ground, roots pushing into cracks in the rock, and a loud rush of water that drowns out any other sound. Even the "limestoned voices" seem to belong to the stone itself, too muffled to hear over the "gasp & suck" of the water.

The mood moves from wonder to something more uneasy and then to awe. The water is beautiful but also a little rough, with scum and debris caught in its throat. When the speakers crouch in the sun and pray "for a rain of calcium," they seem to be asking to become part of the slow process that builds the rock. The ending lifts the eyes upward. A sky that is "impossibly high & thin" makes the climb down feel like a passage into a different sense of scale, small and humbled.

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