El Donado Marcos de la Sierra — Summary

Dave BontaInspired

Day after day the lizards dance on the sand. When the sun climbs high the mountains won’t sit still. Even the tortoise toiling as little as he can moves in time with the maguey’s sharp-tongued shadow.

Sun. Tree. Stone. Sky. The will to circle in the wind. To walk like Lucifer up & down in the earth or lope like Coyote, always one meal from the end.

Let the fullness without break the drought within– the way all teeming prayers & curses seem to seed the clouds, go stepping out with feet of rain on a Galilee of air.

This very day I too will begin dancing.

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The poem opens in a hot, dry landscape where everything seems to move: lizards dance on the sand, the mountains shimmer and refuse to hold still in the heat, and even a lazy tortoise keeps pace with the shadow of a maguey plant. Nature here is stripped down to a few bare things (sun, tree, stone, sky) and a stubborn urge to keep circling and moving. The speaker pictures restless figures such as Lucifer pacing the earth and Coyote loping along, always close to hunger.

Then the poem turns toward hope. The speaker wishes that the fullness outside might break the emptiness inside, the way human prayers and curses seem to seed the clouds until rain walks across the air. The image of feet of rain on a "Galilee of air" gives the sky a quiet, almost holy feeling.

The mood moves from parched and weary to playful and determined. The short last lines feel like a decision: if everything else is dancing, the speaker will join in, starting today.

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