By-Catch — Poem analysis

Dave BontaAnxious

All this by-catch to carry away.

Who is going to sign for it? Who?

Some land must pay.

I count the stations of the sea.

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By-catch is an ugly word for an ugly fact. In fishing, it names the creatures hauled up in nets by accident: the wrong species, the wrong size, the unwanted. They are usually dumped, and nobody records them as a loss. Dave Bonta's four-line poem takes that word and asks what happens to the things we take without meaning to, and who is answerable for them. Its central idea is that harm without an owner doesn't vanish. It gets passed along until it lands somewhere, and the speaker can do little except witness it and keep count.

The first line is a fragment: "All this by-catch to carry away." There is no finite verb, only an infinitive, so the sentence never quite arrives. "All this" points at something the reader can't see, as if the poem began mid-gesture, with the speaker standing over a heap. "Carry away" works two ways. Literally it means hauling off, but the phrase also hints at being *carried away*, overwhelmed. The task is physical and emotional at once, and it is too big.

Then the register changes. "Who is going to sign for it? Who?" is the language of deliveries and paperwork, the question a courier asks at a door. Dead and discarded sea life becomes a parcel nobody will accept. The second "Who?" stands alone, a single stressed syllable that gets no reply. The poem doesn't answer it. What follows is a verdict: "Some land must pay."

That line is the strangest in the poem, and the most revealing. The reader expects a person or a company to be named. Instead the answer is "some land," indefinite and impersonal. The cost shifts from sea to shore, from the place where the damage happened to a place that never agreed to take it. The poem doesn't say which land, and that vagueness feels deliberate: blame has been spread so thin that no one can be pointed at. "Pay" also does double work. It suggests a debt settled and a price suffered. The line is short, three beats, and flat like a ruling. It also rhymes with "away" in line one, the poem's only full rhyme. Disposal and debt are linked at the level of sound: whatever gets carried away comes back as a bill.

Only in the last line does the speaker appear: "I count the stations of the sea." After three lines of impersonal questions and pronouncements, a first-person voice steps forward. "Stations" is the richest word here. It recalls the Stations of the Cross, the series of fourteen stopping points in a Christian devotion that follows suffering step by step. Applied to the sea, that borrowed ritual turns the by-catch into something to be mourned. Judging by the wording, "stations" might also suggest points of measurement, places where the sea is sampled and tallied. Either way, "count" matters. It is the language of accounting, but it is also the language of the rosary. The speaker doesn't settle the bill the poem has just presented. The speaker keeps a tally, which is an act of attention and perhaps of penance.

The sound of the last line supports this. "I count the stations of the sea" falls almost into a steady iambic rhythm, noticeably smoother than the jagged lines before it, as if counting has a calming, liturgical pull. The sibilants of "sign," "Some," "stations" and "sea" run through the second, third and fourth lines like a low wash of water, while the hard *c* of "catch" and "carry" returns in "count," tying the first line to the last.

The layout does quiet work too. Each line is its own stanza, with white space on all sides. The poem becomes a series of stopping points, a small set of stations itself, and the pauses leave room for the unanswered "Who?" to hang there.

What makes the poem significant is its refusal to lecture. It never mentions pollution, overfishing, or blame, and trusts a single technical word to carry the subject. In place of an argument it gives the reader a question and a signature line, and leaves them wondering whether they are among the ones who should sign.

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