Against nature — Poem analysis

Dave BontaAnxious

Unseasonable light: war, arson, a city.

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Six words, a colon and a title: Dave Bonta's "Against nature" gives a reader almost nothing to hold, which is how it gets its grip. The title delivers a verdict before the poem has begun, and the poem then has to show what it is against.

The first word is the strangest. "Unseasonable" belongs to weather talk, to unseasonable warmth or an unseasonable frost. It implies that things have a proper time, and that light has one too: the long evenings of summer, the thin grey afternoons of winter. Light that arrives out of season has turned up where it shouldn't. That is unsettling, because light is normally the thing we welcome. The sound of the line adds to this. "Unseasonable" takes five syllables to unroll, then "light" lands as a single flat beat, like a slow approach ending in a flash.

The colon is the hinge. It works like an equals sign: unseasonable light *is* war, arson, a city. The three items are carefully chosen. War is vast, collective and abstract. Arson shrinks the scale to one person and one flame, and it is the only word in the list that insists on intent. Fire is set on purpose, so the poem quietly refuses the idea that disasters simply happen. Then comes "a city," and the list swerves. A reader can take it two ways. In the first, the city is what burns, the target of the war and the arson, and the unseasonable light is its fire. In the second, the city is itself the unnatural light, a spread of lamps that refuses the dark. On that reading the poem puts building in the same family as destroying, which is a much more uncomfortable claim. The poem never chooses, and judging by the text, that refusal looks deliberate. The indefinite article matters too. It is "a city," not a named one, so the poem is pinned to no particular place, war or date. Readers fill the gap with whatever they know.

The form is as bare as the content. There is no rhyme and no regular metre. The lines run roughly six syllables, then three, then three, so the poem seems to shrink as it goes, the way a flame sinks or a list runs out of breath. The comma in "war, arson" makes a small pause, and the poem then falls away on "a city," with its stress on the first syllable and a soft trailing second. Sound does quiet work as well. The hissing *s* of "unseasonable," "arson" and "city" suggests the crackle of fire, and the *ar* of "war" and "arson" echoes across the two words, tying the huge event to the single act. "Light" and "city" share a vowel sound that connects the opening to the close. The poem also ends without a full stop. Nothing signals that the list is finished, so it could go on, and the light could still be burning.

Its significance lies in how much work it asks the reader to do. The poem is compact enough to resemble a haiku, though it doesn't follow that form's syllable count. It trusts the reader to complete the thought. It also borrows the language of nature ("unseasonable," "against nature") and uses it as a measuring stick for human behaviour, quietly suggesting that nature has its own times and its own light and that we have wrenched ours out of step with it. The poem does not mention climate. But "unseasonable" has become a word we meet constantly in news about weather, and a modern reader may hear that echo, whether or not it was intended.

What stays with you is the equation the colon builds. Destruction and construction, the match and the street lamp, arrive in the same breath, and the poem leaves you to decide how far apart they really are.

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