Fashioned — Summary

We make ourselves impossible to express in clothes, like streets with carpets of gold and silver, our eyes at last overcome with what we have seen, going home drunk in the evening suit, rich with embroidery.

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Bonta's short poem is about the way clothes let us say what we can't say outright. The opening lines claim that we make ourselves "impossible to express" in what we wear, as if an outfit could hold a feeling or a self too big for ordinary speech. The comparison that follows is dazzling: clothes become "streets with carpets / of gold and silver," a whole glittering world we walk through.

Then the mood shifts. Our eyes are "overcome with what / we have seen," and we head home "drunk / in the evening suit." The speaker seems to feel a mix of wonder and tipsy exhaustion, like the end of a long night out. The "rich with embroidery" finish lingers on surface beauty, though it also leaves a quiet question: is the glamour the real experience, or only its decoration?

The poem feels lush, dreamy, and a little wistful, like the blur of a grand evening just as it ends.

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