Coronation day — Poem analysis

Dave BontaRomantic

Pleasure is a red throne and all the fiddlers in red. Come to me as if to the ground, as if walking up and down or going to the kitchen. Eat the first dish on the king’s table and give me music of all sorts— but above all, a kiss.

And we stayed till the city had a light like a glory round about it and a great many men and women laid hold of us, drinking to us one after another— a strange frolic. At last to bed, and I found myself wet with joy, body like a put-out fire. I shut my eyes against any other world.

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Pleasure, not a monarch, sits on the throne in Dave Bonta's "Coronation day." The poem borrows the pomp of a crowning and hands it to desire. The "red throne" and the fiddlers "in red" set up a royal scene, but the first stanza is really an invitation to a lover, and the second is the night that follows. The central idea is that private happiness can outshine public glory, and that a body at rest can feel like a whole world.

The opening line is a flat declaration, "Pleasure is a red throne," with no hedging, as if it were simply true. Red does double duty. It is the color of ceremony, and it is the color of blood, heat and kissing. Then the tone shifts. The speaker asks the beloved to "Come to me as if / to the ground, / as if walking up and down / or going to the kitchen." Those images are deliberately plain. Grand occasions are usually about being watched, but this invitation asks for ease, for arriving the way you would arrive at something you take for granted. The poem is quietly saying that real intimacy is domestic and unperformed. Yet the next line reaches back up toward privilege: "Eat the first dish / on the king's table." The lovers take the best of the royal feast for themselves. The request for "music of all sorts" narrows at the dash to "above all, a kiss," and the stanza ends by choosing one small thing over a whole orchestra.

The second stanza switches from commands to story, from present wanting to past tense. The language also changes. "Laid hold of us," "a great many men and women," and "a strange frolic" sound like older prose, something from a chronicle or diary. That is an inference from the diction, but it fits the effect, which is of a modern speaker telling a night through a slightly antique, wry voice. The city has "a light like a glory / round about it," which is the language of halos and sacred visions, spread over a drunken crowd. The people who "laid hold of us, drinking to us / one after another" are friendly but also a little overwhelming, and the speaker's dry label of "strange" keeps a bit of distance. The public celebration is warm, loud and slightly absurd.

Then comes the turn: "At last / to bed." The line break after "At last" lets the reader feel the relief. What follows is the poem's boldest image. The speaker is "wet with joy, body / like a put-out fire." The break after "body" holds the word up for a moment before the simile lands. A put-out fire is ambiguous. It suggests being spent and calm, but it also suggests something that was burning only a moment ago, still smoking and warm. It sets up a contrast with the glowing city, where light was spread outward for everyone. Here the fire has been quenched and the light has gone inward.

The last line is the longest in the poem and runs without a break: "I shut my eyes against any other world." The length lets it settle like a closing door. The line can be read as contentment, since nothing outside this bed is needed. It can also be read as refusal, a deliberate turning away from the crowds, the king and the glory. "Against" is a strong word. It sounds almost defensive, as though the outside world might still push in. The phrase "any other world" also implies that the bed has become a world of its own, with its own throne and its own coronation.

The poem has no rhyme and no regular meter. Its rhythm comes from short, breathing lines and from the way sentences stretch across them, especially in the second stanza, where the long, crowded middle sentence mimics the swirl of the party before the quiet of the ending. The repeated "as if" in the first stanza gives a coaxing, almost musical rhythm.

The poem is significant for how much it does in so little space. It shows that public ceremony can be a backdrop to a smaller, truer event. It also balances grandeur and humor, with a throne at one end and a kitchen at the other, and ends on a sensual image of quiet. The reader leaves it feeling that the real coronation happened in the dark, with the eyes closed.

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