Horticultured — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

the garden gives me nothing I am glad

after love or great disorder in an unknown nest I could be quiet

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A garden is supposed to give. It gives tomatoes, roses, shade, a feeling of peace, and a thousand tidy metaphors about growth and renewal. Dave Bonta's "Horticultured" opens by refusing all of that: "the garden gives me nothing". The surprise comes in the next line, which is only three words long: "I am glad". The poem is about that gladness, and about why someone might be relieved to be given nothing.

The title is the first clue. "Horticultured" is a coined word that fuses horticulture, the cultivation of gardens, with "cultured", meaning refined or civilised. As a past participle it describes something done to a person, so the speaker may be someone who has been tended, trimmed and trained into shape. That is an inference from the wordplay, not something the poem states, but it fits the rest. The garden stands for order and cultivation, a place where everything has been arranged to mean something. The speaker's gladness at receiving "nothing" reads as relief from being improved, consoled or taught.

The second stanza supplies the contrast. "After love or great disorder" is a striking pairing. The word "or" puts love and disorder on the same level, as two kinds of upheaval, and the poem never says which one it means or whether they are the same thing. Then comes "in an unknown nest". A nest is the opposite of a garden bed: it isn't planted or designed, only made quickly from whatever is at hand, and it is a place to shelter and recover. The word "unknown" adds that the speaker does not even know the place. Where the garden is cultivated and familiar, the nest is wild and anonymous, and it is there that the speaker imagines being "quiet".

The verb is worth noticing. The speaker doesn't say "I am quiet" or "I will be quiet" but "I could be quiet". The modal verb makes the peace a possibility, not a fact. The poem ends on that open door, and the absence of a full stop leaves it open on the page too. There is no punctuation anywhere, and apart from "I" there are no capitals. The poem is stripped down in its form as well as its argument, as if punctuation were another bit of pruning.

The line breaks do much of the work. Read without the break, "gives me nothing I am glad" tangles into a half-sentence, as if the speaker were glad of something the garden gives. The break separates the two statements and lets the admission stand alone. The short, flat "I am glad" sounds almost like a confession.

The poem has no rhyme and no regular metre. The lines are short and loosely stressed, with the longer first and third lines (both about seven syllables) giving way to brief, quieter endings: "I am glad", "in an unknown nest", "I could be quiet". Sound does some quiet linking. The hard g of "garden", "gives" and "glad" ties the speaker's gladness to the garden's refusal. The soft n sounds of "nothing", "unknown" and "nest" carry a sense of hush, so that the poem seems to move toward the quiet it describes before it names it.

What makes the poem worth reading is how much it holds in five lines. It resists a familiar habit of nature writing, in which a garden, a tree or a sunrise must offer a lesson or a comfort. Here nature gives nothing, and that turns out to be the generous thing, because it asks nothing in return. The speaker doesn't have to feel inspired or restored or grateful. After upheaval, the poem suggests, the most healing thing may not be a beautiful, meaningful place but an unremarkable one where nothing is expected of you. Readers who have ever been tired of being told that something should make them feel better may recognise that gladness at once.

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