Naturalist — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

In my cold boots I come to a field and a vineyard and a garden: no flowers. Back to the fen in which I found all things.

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Eight short lines hold a whole walk: a person sets out in cold boots, checks the tidy places where beauty is supposed to live, finds them empty, and turns back to the one place that has never let them down. The poem is called "Naturalist", and it works as a quiet definition of the word. A naturalist, it suggests, is someone who knows where to look.

It begins with the boots, not the walker. Dave Bonta could have written "I am cold" and chose something more physical. The body shrinks to its footwear, the working gear of someone who spends time outdoors, and the cold arrives through the soles. The season is never named, but "no flowers" a few lines later lets us infer a bare, chilly stretch of the year. Everything else in the first half comes through the feet: the walker simply arrives, one place after another.

That sense of arrival comes from the repeated "and". "I come to a field / and a vineyard / and a garden" is a list with no hurry in it, each stop added like a step. The three places also seem to grow more arranged by people. A field can be fairly wild, a vineyard is planted in rows for profit, and a garden is tended for its looks. By the end the walker has reached the spot where flowers are most expected. The colon after "garden" sets up a reveal, and the reveal is "no flowers", the shortest line of the opening five. It is a blunt, flat negation, like a door closing.

Then the poem turns, and it does so without a verb. "Back to the fen" doesn't say "I go" or "I return". It might be a decision, a command to oneself, or a tired sigh. A fen is low, wet, unfarmed ground, the opposite of rows and borders, and the poem gives it no description at all. The tenses also shift. The first half is in the present ("I come"), but the fen belongs to the past: "in which I found / all things." The speaker's failure in the tended places sends them back to somewhere already known. "Found" is also the right verb for a naturalist, since finding is the whole job.

The poem's sound is plain. There is no rhyme and no regular metre. The lines run to three or four syllables, apart from the five-syllable second line, and what holds them together is syntax and repetition rather than any sound pattern. The ear still picks up small links. "Field", "flowers", "fen" and "found" all share an opening f, so the missing flowers leave an echo behind them. The two shortest lines, "no flowers" and "all things", mirror each other. One ends the walk and the other ends the poem, and they set nothing against everything. Because "all things" is only two syllables, both heavy, it lands slowly, like a last footstep.

The poem's significance lies in how much it claims with so little. "All things" could be a boast or an exaggeration, but the dry, understated tone makes it persuasive. Judging by the imagery, the fen holds everything a garden leaves out: mud, water, decay and the untidy business of life as it actually goes on. Gardens and vineyards are nature arranged for human use or pleasure. The fen is nature on its own terms, and the poem suggests that this is where a real observer finds what matters.

That is why the title matters so much. Nowhere does the speaker call themselves a naturalist, and the poem never explains the word. It lets one disappointing walk and one decision to turn around show what the word means. We are left to notice that the walker's cold boots, which seemed like a small detail at the start, have carried them to the right place after all.

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