Messenger — Poem analysis

Dave BontaRomantic

The guitar spoke of love and war, sand and water, and showed the ships to my wife in my absence.

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Four lines in, and the speaker has already vanished. The only trace of the "I" in Dave Bonta's "Messenger" is a pair of possessives, "my wife" and "my absence," while all the action belongs to a guitar. An instrument speaks, shows, and takes the husband's place, and the reader has to decide whether that is a comfort or a threat.

The title points toward comfort. A messenger carries words between people who cannot meet, so the guitar seems to be delivering something to the wife on the husband's behalf. The grammar is less settled, though. Nobody is said to have sent the guitar. It simply "spoke," and it did so "in my absence." Read one way, the music is a love letter that crosses the distance. Read another, the guitar is a rival doing what the husband should have been there to do. The poem never chooses, and the tension comes from that refusal.

What the guitar says is a list: "love and war, sand and water." These are two pairs, and they work differently. The first is the oldest material of songs and stories, the two subjects that have always been sung about. The second is physical and describes a shoreline, the place where land gives way to sea. The list moves from big abstractions to something you could stand on. Sound ties it together. The repeated "and" and the echo between "war" and "water" make the line feel like a phrase of music, with matching shapes at either end.

Then the verb changes. The guitar "spoke," but it "showed the ships." A guitar cannot literally show anyone anything, so the wife must be seeing these ships in her mind, or in memory. The sense shifts from hearing to seeing, and music becomes picture. The ships also draw the earlier pairs together. A ship crosses water and leaves sand behind, and it can carry soldiers or lovers. Judging by these images, the husband may be away at sea or at war, and the poem brushes against the old story of a woman watching the horizon for a returning sail. Bonta never says so outright. He lets the objects suggest it.

The shape of the poem supports this restraint. There is no rhyme and no regular meter, but the lines are balanced: roughly four syllables, then eight, then seven, then four. The short opening line, "The guitar spoke," stops on its verb, so we wait a beat before learning what was said. The long middle lines hold the scope of the music, with its whole catalogue of themes and its ships. The last line is short again, and it ends on "absence," a word that fades as it is said, so the poem seems to stop in the way it describes. The line break between "my wife" and "in my absence" works the same way. The wife is named, and only afterward do we learn that the husband was not there.

One further detail is easy to miss. The poem is told in the flat, past-tense voice of a report. The speaker was absent, yet he knows what the guitar said and what it showed. Either someone has told him, or he is imagining the scene. That gap gives the poem its uneasy intimacy. He cannot be in the room, but he cannot stop picturing it either.

In four lines the poem sets absence against a presence that is not quite a person. It suggests that when someone leaves, something else will speak into the silence, whether music, memory or imagination. It also suggests that the one who left can only guess whether that voice is carrying his message or replacing him. The poem is brief, but it leaves the reader inside that uncertainty.

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