Wine-dark sea — Poem analysis

The sea is great company but poor entertainment. We go out all in mourning, believing it a sermon and a pall.

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Five short lines, and Dave Bonta's poem manages to argue with a few thousand years of writing about the sea. It begins with a calm, almost conversational verdict: "The sea is great company / but poor entertainment." Then it turns on us. We, not the water, are the ones who "go out / all in mourning," treating the sea as if it were "a sermon and a pall." The central idea is that people load the sea with solemn meaning it never asked to carry. What it actually offers is presence, not performance.

The opening verdict rests on a contrast between two words that sound alike in function but differ in kind. "Company" is something you simply have; a friend can sit beside you in silence and still be good company. "Entertainment" is something you demand, something that has to do tricks. By calling the sea the first and not the second, the speaker gives it a quiet dignity. It is vast, constant and indifferent, and so it does not perform for us. Even the length of the words matters. "Entertainment" is a clumsy, many-syllabled word, and it sits awkwardly in the line, as if the idea itself were a bit ridiculous when applied to an ocean.

Then the poem shrinks to its smallest line: "We go out." These three monosyllables are plain enough to be literal, since people go out to sea. But the phrase also echoes a candle going out, or a tide going out, and both hint at endings. The next line, "all in mourning," tightens that hint. The word also sounds exactly like "morning," and it is tempting to hear both: we set out at dawn, dressed in grief. Whether or not Bonta intended the pun, the ear catches it, and it makes the departure feel both ordinary and funereal.

That sets up the last line, which is the longest and heaviest. "Believing it a sermon and a pall" gathers two religious, funerary images. A sermon is a lesson delivered from above, and a pall is the cloth laid over a coffin. Both turn the sea into a moral instrument, a preacher or a shroud. The key word, though, is "believing." The poem does not say the sea is a sermon; it says we believe it is. That small participle shifts the blame from the water to the watchers, and it makes the grief look like something we bring along rather than something we find there. The title supports this reading. "Wine-dark sea" is a famous phrase from Homer's epics, so it seems to invite the poem into the old tradition of heroic, weighty seafaring. The wine-dark colour also fits the mourning clothes and, with "sermon," carries a faint suggestion of church. The poem borrows all that grandeur, then quietly questions it.

The form does similar work. There is no regular metre and no end rhyme, which suits the plain, spoken tone of the first two lines. But the sound is not careless. The lines run roughly seven, six, three and four syllables, then swell to nine, so the poem contracts and then spreads out in its final line like a wave running up a beach. There is also a hidden rhyme across the last two lines: "all in mourning" leads to "pall," and the long "all" sound tolls like a bell. The hard "p" of "poor," "pall" and the soft hissing of "sea," "company" and "sermon" give the short text a texture of sound that holds it together.

What makes the poem worth reading is its restraint. It would be easy to write yet another solemn ode to the sea's mystery or danger. Instead Bonta suggests that our solemnity might be a habit, a costume we put on before we have even looked at the water. He does not say whether the habit is foolish or understandable, and the poem is stronger for leaving that open. A reader finishes it wondering what the sea would look like if we stopped dressing for a funeral and simply kept it company.

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