Nonviolence — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

I answer a word as red as war with play. We can act like puppets, or be content to be.

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Four short lines carry a whole argument about what to do when someone throws a word at you. Dave Bonta's "Nonviolence" begins with a reply rather than a provocation: "I answer a word as red as war / with play." We never learn what the word is. It could be an insult, a slogan, a threat, or just a label that makes a room go tense. By leaving it blank, the poem lets any hostile word stand in, and everyone has met one.

All we are told is the word's colour, and the comparison is odd. We expect "red as blood" or "red as fire". Here the yardstick is war itself, an abstraction that already glows red in the imagination. The sound of the line supports this. "Answer," "word" and "war" are knotted together by the same w and r sounds, so the reply and the thing replied to seem to share a mouth. The title adds another layer. "Nonviolence" has "violence" sitting inside it, so the word red as war may be hiding in plain sight, with the prefix "non-" laid over it like a hand over a flame. That is a reading rather than a certainty, but the poem's economy makes such details hard to ignore.

The structure does a lot of quiet work. The poem has no rhyme and no regular metre, and the lines shrink as they go: nine syllables, then five, five and four. The first line is long and loaded, and its sentence is left hanging at the line break. When "with play" finally arrives, it is tiny, a two-syllable answer to a heavy question. The poem answers volume with smallness, so its form acts out its message. The only echo is the repeated "be" at the ends of the last two lines, a rhyme of a word with itself, calm and steady where rhyme might have been clever.

The middle of the poem turns on a change of pronoun: "I answer" becomes "We can act." A private habit becomes a shared choice. "Can" is an offer, not an order, and the poem never lectures or names a villain. The word "act" at the line's end also works two ways. It means to take action, and it means to perform a part. The performing sense leads straight into the image of puppets. Puppets are playthings, so the poem's own word "play" shadows them, but their play is scripted and moved by strings. If a red word makes us snap back in kind, the word is pulling the strings. Real play is the opposite: unpredictable and free, impossible to write in advance.

The last line, "content to be," sets that freedom against the puppet's life. After the line break, "or be" stands bare for a moment as a command to exist, which some readers may hear as a faint echo of Hamlet's famous "to be or not to be". Then "content" settles it, and the word matters. Contentment is the opposite of the restless need to win that feeds a quarrel. Play and simply being share one feature: neither is aimed at victory. War is all about outcomes, and these two are done for their own sake.

Here is where the poem earns its significance. Nonviolence is usually defined by what it refuses, since the word itself is built from a negative. Bonta gives it positive content, and it is not passivity. The speaker does not ignore the word or flee from it. The speaker answers, and the answer is an act, a chosen one. The poem proposes that the strongest reply to a loaded word may be one the word cannot predict.

The poem also practises what it preaches. It is small, unshouting and a little light-footed, a reply made of the same quiet materials it recommends. It ends on a state of being rather than a command, so the reader is left to decide between being worked and being content, and that is the poem's own kind of nonviolence.

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