Writing process — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

I set out in the morning on a journey without any words to a half acre of land where I always have been.

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Twenty-three words, four lines, and a paradox folded neatly inside. Dave Bonta's "Writing process" promises to show how writing happens, then walks off the page: the speaker sets out "on a journey without any words." A poem cannot exist without words, and yet it claims to be about leaving them behind. That tension drives everything that follows.

The opening sounds like the start of a folk tale or a pilgrimage. "Set out," "in the morning" and "journey" are plain, mostly one-syllable words, but they carry the weight of old quest stories, and we expect a far-off destination. Line three seems to deliver one, and then shrinks it: "a half acre of land." A half acre is a surveyor's measurement, a patch you could cross in a minute or two. The grand verb "journey" meets a very small noun, and the mismatch is gently comic. It also hints that this quest will not be about distance.

The line break after "where" is the poem's quiet hinge. "Where" is a word that leans forward and needs a description to follow: where the grass is long, where the creek bends. Instead the sentence swings back to the speaker: "I always have been." The place is never described. It is only implied by the grammar, since "there" is left out and the verb "been" is left bare. The twist lies in the tense. "Always have been" makes the journey one toward a place the speaker never left. The slightly unusual word order, "I always have been" rather than "I have always been," also puts weight on "always" and ends the poem on the plain, final word "been," which is a form of the verb "to be."

The form supports this idea. There is no rhyme and no strict meter, just the rhythm of ordinary speech, with lines running roughly six, eight, seven and then five syllables. The first three lines move at an easy, walking pace. The last is the shortest, so the poem seems to stop moving and stand still, as if it has arrived. The "I" that opens the first line returns at the start of the last, and the poem circles back on itself like a walk that ends on the doorstep. There is a little sound play as well. "Without," "words" and "where" echo each other with their w sounds, so the very word the speaker has supposedly abandoned is quietly surrounded and highlighted.

What does the poem suggest about writing? Judging by the title, the journey is the process. On this reading, writing begins before language, in attention, in walking, in simply being in a place. The material is not somewhere distant but somewhere the writer has always been, and the work is arriving at it, not travelling toward it. The word "any" in "without any words" is insistent. It describes complete silence, not just a lack of fancy language. The poem also leaves open whether the half acre is literal ground or a figure for the mind. "Half acre" feels so specific that it seems like real land, while "always" lifts it into something almost timeless. The poem needs both readings.

Its significance comes partly from this economy. Many poems about writing explain at length, but this one enacts its idea by being small, plain and unfinished-looking, leaving a lot of white space around its few words. It trusts the reader to fill the silence. It is also quietly honest about its own contradiction. The poem itself could be the few words carried back from the wordless place, a trace left after the journey, though that is an interpretation, not something the text states.

For a student reader, the poem asks a useful question: what happens in you before you write the first sentence? Its answer is that a lot happens, and none of it is made of words.

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