Message in a bottle — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

The sea is given our letter relating the bad condition of the money, and it is well received.

I lie to God but not to the rain, my mind full of money— a little green chamber.

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

The poem imagines a strange kind of correspondence. Someone writes a letter about the "bad condition of the money" and hands it to the sea, which accepts it graciously. The title suggests a message cast adrift, sent without any expectation of a human reader. The speaker seems to be dealing with money worries, and the sea is the only listener willing to take them in.

The second stanza turns more personal. The speaker admits to lying to God but not to the rain, as if honesty comes easier with something that can't judge. Their mind is "full of money," pictured as "a little green chamber," a phrase that suggests both the colour of banknotes and a small, closed-in room where thoughts keep circling.

The mood is quiet, wry, and a little trapped. There's dry humour in the sea receiving the letter so well, but underneath it sits a sense of anxiety and loneliness, and a need to tell the truth to someone, or something.

Read also

More by Dave Bonta

All poems
ContemplativeDave Bonta

Plea bargain

I hear half a beat of drum to serve time have half a hope in the meantime praise God
DreamyDave Bonta

Cibola 3

I awake in the dark and shake free of sheets & blankets, of down-filled quilt. The rituals of waking– the long, hot shower, the coffee–give
ContemplativeDave Bonta

In good light

On a maple’s pale bark, a zigzag ladder—old tooth-marks from a wandering snail? Green islands of moss