Inspirational poster — Poem analysis

how we picture the sea at the office where we sat and sat

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Thirteen words and a two-word title are all Dave Bonta needs to hang an entire working life on a wall. The title names the object: one of those posters that decorate corridors and meeting rooms, usually a wave or a lone sailboat with a single noble word printed underneath. The three lines then work like a caption. But instead of "Perseverance" or "Horizons," the caption admits something the poster was never designed to say.

The central idea is the gap between an image of freedom and the life lived beneath it. In "how we picture the sea / at the office," the sea exists only as a picture, framed and flat and indoors. "Picture" does double duty. It is a noun, the thing on the wall, but it is also a verb, what people do in their heads when the real view is a desk. The sea is therefore both what the poster shows and what the workers daydream, and either way it is secondhand. Nobody in the poem is anywhere near water.

The line breaks control the turn. "at the office" could almost end the sentence, a flat, complete statement. Then the third line pulls it further: "where we sat and sat." The office is redefined by what happens there, which is nothing but sitting. The past tense matters too. "Sat" gives the line a backward look, as though the speakers are remembering a stretch of time that now seems hard to account for. The poem gives no reason for this, so that mood is an inference from the grammar, but it is a strong one.

The sound of the poem makes the same point quietly. There is no rhyme and no punctuation, and everything is lowercase, so the deadpan voice never rises into the cheerfulness a poster would want. The first line is the longest, at six syllables, and the next two settle at five each, so the poem seems to lose energy as it goes. Its one open, airy sound, the long "ee" of "we" and "sea," is answered in the last line by the clipped short "a" of "sat." "Sea" and "sat" also share their opening sound, so the poem's most expansive word and its dullest verb are phonetic cousins. The sea has been turned into sitting. The "s" runs on through "office" as well, a faint hiss that never becomes a wave.

The repetition in "sat and sat" is the poem's cleverest move. The small word "and" stretches time the way a long afternoon does, and the stresses fall on both verbs, so the line ticks like a clock. Repetition is also exactly what the sea is famous for, since waves keep arriving one after another. In nature that sameness feels vast and consoling. In the office it feels like being stuck. The poem never says this outright. It lets two kinds of repetition sit side by side, the endless sea in the picture and the endless sitting beneath it.

Then there is the pronoun, always "we." The poster is addressed to everyone, and the sitting is shared. Nobody here is a lone rebel or a lone victim. The poem is neither angry nor sentimental about this. It records the situation and stops.

That restraint is much of its significance. The poem uses the language of a caption, a format meant to tell you what to feel, to show how little a decorative image can do. Whether the poster failed, or whether a picture of the sea was all anyone in that room was ever going to get, the poem leaves for the reader to decide. For students, it is a useful example of how a title can supply half the meaning, how a line break can create a pause and then take it back, and how a repeated word can carry a whole tone of boredom in just five syllables.

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