Seasoning — Poem analysis

Dave BontaRomantic

I eat out of the pot his gold-laced suit still on my mind

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Twenty words, three lines, and a whole scene: someone eating straight from the cooking pot while the thought of another person's expensive clothing refuses to leave them alone. Dave Bonta gives us no name for "him," no reason for the suit, and no explanation of the speaker's mood. What we get is a gesture and a mental image set side by side, and the poem's meaning lives in the gap between them.

Start with the gesture. Eating "out of the pot" is what people do when they are alone, in a hurry, or past caring about manners. There is no plate, no table, no audience. The act is plain and a little raw, and the flat, monosyllabic first line suits it: "I eat out of the pot" is six short words with nothing ornamental in them. Against this comes the second line, which is all glitter. "Gold-laced" brings in a different world of braid, display and rank. The poem sets the cook-pot against the costume and lets the reader feel how far apart they are.

The title tells us how to connect them. Seasoning is what gives food its taste, yet the word never appears in the poem's body. The only thing that could be seasoning the meal is the suit lodged "on my mind." On this reading, memory or obsession works like a spice, changing how the speaker experiences even the simplest food. We are not told whether the flavor is bitter or sweet. The speaker might be envious, grieving, resentful, or simply fascinated. The poem withholds the emotion and leaves us tasting for ourselves.

The word "laced" may add something more. Food and drink can be "laced" with something added, often something that doesn't belong. Placed next to a title about flavoring a meal, the word gives the glamorous image a faint hint of contamination. I would treat this as a possibility the wording opens up rather than a certainty, but it fits the poem's habit of letting one word carry two meanings.

The line breaks do similar work. Read the first two lines without pausing and you get "I eat out of the pot his gold-laced suit," which for a split second sounds as if the speaker is swallowing the suit. The sentence then rights itself, but the brief image of consuming someone's finery stays with us, and it suits a poem about an appetite that is more than physical. The break after "still" is just as important. "Still" means "continuing to" in the phrase "still on my mind," but at the end of its line it also means motionless. A suit that is still is a suit hanging empty, without its wearer inside. The poem never says what happened to the man, and I would not claim to know. But that small stillness, together with a speaker who cannot stop thinking about the clothes rather than the person, gives the poem a quiet, haunted undertone.

The sound is carefully handled, too. There is no rhyme and no punctuation, and "I" is the only capital letter, so the lines feel like thoughts drifting by rather than a composed statement. The count shrinks from six syllables to five to three, so the poem thins out as it goes and ends on the short, heavy "on my mind." The sibilance of "gold-laced suit still" has a low hiss that I can easily imagine as a simmering pot, though that is my reading of the sound and not something the text states. The long "i" in "I" and "mind" frames the poem, so the speaker's self and the speaker's preoccupation bracket the unnamed man between them.

What makes the poem worth reading is how much it trusts a small, concrete pairing. It doesn't announce a theme of class, loss, or desire, although any of these could fit. It gives us one domestic act and one stubborn image and allows them to flavor each other. The short form is not a limit here but the point, since the lines leave out almost everything and the speaker's mind keeps returning to the one thing that remains.

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