Mountain state (1) — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

High in the mountains one hayfield remains uncut. A doe’s ear twitches.

Bed of the Dry Fork scored for tic-tac-toe: water fills all the squares with zero.

Camp at the woods’ edge. Morning sun brings rhododendrons into your tent.

Steep banks, big boulders, pools – everything but otters in Otter Creek.

At Dolly Sods when the wind slows down, it’s delicious: wild azaleas.

When they cut the forest, the soil burned off. Bleeding hearts bloom among the rocks.

On two different hikes I looked at lichens & left the map in my pack.

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Seven short haiku-like scenes follow a walker through a wild, mountainous landscape. The place names (Dry Fork, Otter Creek, Dolly Sods) suggest a real region, though the poem never says more than that. Nothing dramatic happens. Instead, the speaker notices small things: an uncut hayfield, a doe's twitching ear, rhododendrons glowing into a tent in the morning light.

There is quiet humor too. The dry creek bed becomes a tic-tac-toe board filled with zeros, and Otter Creek turns out to have everything except otters. A darker note appears when the speaker says the soil "burned off" after the forest was cut, yet bleeding hearts still bloom among the rocks. Nature seems damaged but persistent.

The mood is relaxed, curious and gently playful. The last stanza sums it up: the speaker looks at lichens and leaves the map in the pack, choosing wandering and close attention over getting anywhere in particular.

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