Rising sea level — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

The land is charging the sea interest for the growing debt, this diminution— oysters in the office the sea terms a bed.

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Dave Bonta's short poem turns rising sea levels into a story about money. The land, it says, is charging the sea interest on a debt that keeps growing. That reverses what we might expect: the sea is taking ground, yet the poem frames the land as the one with a claim, as if the loss were an unpaid bill. The word "diminution" sits alone on its line and sounds cold and official, like something from a ledger, while describing the shrinking of the shore.

Then the poem lands on a strange, funny image: oysters in the office. Sea creatures have moved into human workspaces, and the sea calls this a bed, a place to rest and settle. The speaker's tone seems dry and wry rather than panicked. The mood is quietly unsettling, with a little dark humor. Business language keeps trying to make the loss manageable, but the sea simply moves in anyway.

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