Death of a queen — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

A candlestick coven over her oven, an ash and ham sandwich at table. How much fault was laid upon the doctor Death! Going to sea, the queen met her water.

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Dave Bonta's poem reads like a small, strange riddle about a queen's death. It never says plainly what happened, so the reader has to piece it together from images. The first lines set a domestic scene: candlesticks gathered like a coven of witches over an oven, and a sandwich made of "ash and ham" on the table. Ordinary kitchen things take on a ritual, slightly ghostly feel, as if the house itself is attending a funeral.

Then the tone shifts. People seem to blame "the doctor Death," as though death were a physician who failed her, and the exclamation gives that blame a half-mocking edge. The last two lines are the most striking: "Going to sea, / the queen met her water." The wordplay suggests a journey and an ending at once, and "met her water" feels like meeting fate. The mood is eerie, dark, and playful. The speaker seems less grieved than fascinated, treating death like a odd fairy tale.

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