Toughs — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

Arm in arm go my sword and pistol

and walk up and down full of mischief

as if they are friends or fearful to be alone.

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Two weapons stroll out like a pair of street-corner bullies, and the speaker lets them go. That is the whole scene of Dave Bonta's "Toughs": six short lines in three couplets. Yet it carries a sharp idea, that swagger is often a way of managing fear, and that the instruments of violence may be more nervous than menacing.

The title does much of the work. "Toughs" is an old-fashioned word for rowdy young men who hang about looking for trouble, and the poem never uses it again. We have to work out who the toughs are, and the first lines tell us: "Arm in arm / go my sword and pistol." The pun is hard to miss. The two objects are literally "arms," the word for weapons, and they link arms as people do. A single phrase turns hardware into companions. The odd word order, with the verb "go" ahead of its subject, gives the line a slightly antique, ballad-like ring, as if we were watching a procession and not a pair of tools. The couplet also ends on its subject, so the reader is held for a beat before the sentence moves on.

The pairing itself is worth noticing. A sword and a pistol belong to different ages of fighting, so they are not an obvious match. The poem never explains why they are together. It simply lets them walk, and "up and down" suggests restless pacing, like loiterers with nowhere to be, or sentries with nothing to guard. The movement is aimless but charged. Then comes the understatement that gives the poem its edge: they are "full of mischief." Mischief is a child's word, associated with stolen apples and pulled pigtails. Applied to a sword and a pistol, it makes the threat sound playful, which is more unsettling than a more solemn word would be. The speaker's tone is almost fond, like a parent watching two rascals.

The last couplet turns on the phrase "as if." Until now the weapons have simply been companions. Now the speaker doubts it: they walk "as if they are friends / or fearful to be alone." That second possibility changes how we read everything before it. The arm-in-arm closeness might not be affection at all, only two frightened things clinging together. Toughness here is a performance, and the bravado covers an inability to be alone. The sound of the lines supports this. The f-sounds of "full," "friends" and "fearful" run through the second half and quietly link mischief, friendship and fear. The poem also ends on its longest, slowest line, and the final word, "alone," is left standing by itself with no punctuation to soften it.

The poem has no rhyme and no regular meter, and it doesn't need them. Its lines are short, plain and mostly made of one-syllable words, so it moves at walking pace. The whole poem is one sentence running across the stanza breaks, which keeps the pair in motion like the strollers it describes.

One small word complicates the picture: "my." The sword and pistol belong to the speaker, yet they seem to wander off on their own business. That raises a question the poem leaves open. If these are the speaker's weapons, whose fear is it? Judging by the text, the speaker may be watching a part of himself or herself, the defensive, aggressive side that goes out ahead looking tough. The speaker seems to see through it, with amusement and perhaps some sympathy.

The poem is significant because it does so much with so little. In under thirty words it personifies two objects, plays on a double meaning, and reverses our expectations of what weapons stand for. It does not lecture about violence or courage. It offers a small, slightly comic picture and lets the reader notice that the people who look toughest in a crowd are sometimes the ones most afraid to walk home alone.

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