Torrential — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

Waters deaf and most amorous make bad company. Water fell, choosing places to keep with great authority. Captains of the fleet coming cap in hand went home with a hose.

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Rain is the main character here, and it behaves like a person with power. The opening lines make the water sound like an unwelcome guest: deaf, overly affectionate, and "bad company" because it won't listen and won't leave you alone. Then it falls "choosing places to keep / with great authority," as if the downpour were a landlord or a judge deciding where to settle, and nobody can argue.

The last three lines add a small joke. "Captains of the fleet" suggests people of rank, yet they arrive "cap in hand," like beggars asking a favor, and leave with nothing grander than "a hose." The poem seems to enjoy watching status collapse in front of the weather. The "hose" is a funny, deflating image next to all that rain.

The mood is playful and a little surreal. The speaker sounds amused rather than frightened, treating a storm as a stubborn force that makes human importance look ridiculous. The logic is dreamlike, so it's best to enjoy the images rather than hunt for one fixed meaning.

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