Louder than words — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

the gun made an excellent sermon on the difference between us

I am afraid I have forgot how not to see

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

Two short stanzas, and a lot packed into them. The first sets up a bitter joke: a gun "made an excellent sermon." A sermon is meant to teach or persuade, and here the gun does that job without saying a word, which fits the title, "Louder than words." What it teaches is "the difference between us." The poem doesn't say who the two sides are, but the gun makes the gap feel real, sharp and unavoidable.

The second stanza turns inward. The speaker admits, "I am afraid I have forgot / how not to see." The word "afraid" works two ways: it's a polite apology, and it's also real fear. Having been shown the difference, the speaker can't go back to not noticing it. The mood is cold, uneasy and quietly regretful. There's no shouting, just a calm voice describing a loss of innocence, where seeing something clearly feels more like a burden than a gift.

Read also

More by Dave Bonta

All poems
ContemplativeDave Bonta

Plea bargain

I hear half a beat of drum to serve time have half a hope in the meantime praise God
DreamyDave Bonta

Cibola 3

I awake in the dark and shake free of sheets & blankets, of down-filled quilt. The rituals of waking– the long, hot shower, the coffee–give
ContemplativeDave Bonta

In good light

On a maple’s pale bark, a zigzag ladder—old tooth-marks from a wandering snail? Green islands of moss