Citizen — Summary

Dave BontaInspired

town is a hole I stepped in with my voice full of hard use

jostled and crowded fallen I get up again

I will live sparingly

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The speaker describes life in a town as a kind of accident, a hole they stepped into without looking. The image makes the place feel like a trap or a misstep rather than a home. Their voice is "full of hard use," which suggests it has been worn down by years of speaking, arguing, or simply being heard over other people. The word "citizen" in the title sets up an irony: belonging to a community here seems to mean being jostled and crowded, not welcomed.

Still, the poem doesn't collapse into complaint. The speaker falls, and the plain statement "fallen I get up again" carries a quiet stubbornness. There's no drama in it, just habit and endurance. The last line, "I will live sparingly," works as a vow. Judging by the tone, it could mean living modestly, with few needs, or saving one's energy against the crowd. The mood is tired but steady, a little wary, and oddly dignified. The short lines and spare wording mirror the choice the speaker makes at the end.

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