Doctrine of signatures — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

ink is the first forced temple

I sign and seal an agreement nothing is as personal as handwriting

I make the state a copy with great seeming art

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A signature is supposed to be the one mark on a page that could only be yours. Dave Bonta's six-line «Doctrine of signatures» starts from that idea and quietly turns it inside out.

The title borrows an old belief that nature stamps visible clues on things, so that the shape or colour of a plant announces what it can cure. In that picture the world is already written and the human task is to read it. Bonta moves the word "signature" from the plant to the human hand. Here nobody is reading nature's hints. A person is doing the writing, and doing it for a contract.

The opening couplet is the most enigmatic part: "ink is the first / forced temple". A temple is a sacred place, and the poem suggests that writing is the first one people built, with ink as its material. The adjective "forced" complicates the compliment. It could mean built under compulsion, as if writing began as obligation rather than worship. It could also recall plants "forced" to bloom out of season, which would keep the botanical title alive. The poem doesn't choose between these readings. It also has no capital letter and no full stop, so the claim sounds found rather than argued, like an inscription.

The second couplet drops into legal language. "I sign and seal an agreement" has the hissing alliteration of "sign" and "seal" and the flat rhythm of paperwork. The word "agreement" sits oddly beside "forced", since the poem leaves us wondering how freely anyone agrees. Then comes the longest line, "nothing is as personal as handwriting," which sounds like a proverb. Because there is no punctuation, it slides out of the previous line as though it were the reason the contract binds: handwriting is the most personal thing we have, and that is exactly why institutions want it.

The final couplet turns the personal into the reproducible. "I make the state a copy" can be read as handing the government a duplicate of the document. The word "state" might also hint at a condition or status, though that is an inference. Either way, the one-of-a-kind mark is now one of two identical sheets. The last line, "with great seeming art," depends on its middle word. "Seeming" means appearing, and it carries a whiff of pretence. "Art" can mean skill or artifice, and a copy made with artifice begins to sound like a forgery. The flourish that should guarantee authenticity becomes a performance. The line may also glance at the poem itself, which is a small copy of an experience made with only "seeming" art.

The form supports this uneasy modesty. The poem is three unrhymed couplets with no punctuation and almost no capitals, apart from the "I" that acts in the second and third couplets. Line lengths swell from three syllables ("forced temple") to eleven ("nothing is as personal as handwriting") and then settle to seven and five. The poem has a rise and a fall, like a pen pressing down on a signature line and lifting off. The language is plain, even bureaucratic, which makes the odd phrases stand out all the more: "forced temple" and "seeming art" catch the eye because everything around them is so ordinary.

What makes the poem worth reading is how much it connects in so little space. Within six lines it touches the sacred (temple), the legal (sign and seal) and the civic (the state), and it suggests all three rest on the same fragile thing, a mark made in ink. It doesn't tell us whether to resent that or admire it. A signature is an act of self-expression and also a surrender, since the most individual thing about us is handed over to be filed. The poem leaves that tension open, and the next time you sign a form you may find yourself looking at your own handwriting a little differently.

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