Cruise ship — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

on a river in Norway well lit the land looking back

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

Three short lines hold a surprisingly full scene. A cruise ship glides along a river in Norway, brightly lit against the dark, and the final line turns the picture around: "the land looking back."

The speaker seems to be a quiet observer, perhaps a passenger, perhaps someone watching from a distance. Either way, the poem doesn't tell us how to feel. It simply notices. The phrase "well lit" is plain, almost matter-of-fact, but it suggests a ship glowing like a small, self-contained world, a bright display moving through a much larger landscape.

Then the poem flips our expectations. Tourists usually look at scenery, but here the scenery looks at them. The land becomes a presence, silent and watchful, maybe curious, maybe indifferent. That shift gives the poem a calm, slightly eerie mood. It feels peaceful, but also hints at how visitors can seem like intruders, noticed and observed by the place they've come to admire.

Read also

More by Dave Bonta

All poems
ContemplativeDave Bonta

Plea bargain

I hear half a beat of drum to serve time have half a hope in the meantime praise God
DreamyDave Bonta

Cibola 3

I awake in the dark and shake free of sheets & blankets, of down-filled quilt. The rituals of waking– the long, hot shower, the coffee–give
ContemplativeDave Bonta

In good light

On a maple’s pale bark, a zigzag ladder—old tooth-marks from a wandering snail? Green islands of moss