A walk in the park — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

a park keeper told me what the earth is

cockle shells and weather dust and dead beds

a face for the bountiful world

which we must of necessity break in pieces

with words and blows and a degree of madness

but what is the unhappiness in that if the light is good

surely the land will never suffer it is so great still

and every bird so quiet like a hole the rain drowned

this talk I understand in crayon dancing but deadly full

I hide in sleep a folly that I bring myself to see as true

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A casual encounter with a park keeper becomes a strange meditation on what the earth is and what we do to it. The keeper's answer is a list of odd, worn-down things: shells, weather, dust, old beds. Then the speaker widens the view. The world offers a "bountiful" face, and we feel we must break it into pieces with words and blows and a touch of madness. That is how people understand and use nature, the poem suggests, even if it does damage.

The speaker tries to shrug off the guilt. If the light is good, why be unhappy? The land is so big it surely won't suffer. But the mood doesn't hold. The birds are silent, "like a hole the rain drowned," an image that feels empty and uneasy. By the end the speaker admits to hiding in sleep, a "folly" he talks himself into seeing as true. The tone is dreamy and evasive, with doubt showing through the calm.

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