Learning curve — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

after measuring all inches in a foot I learn to walk

after my appointment with the door I stand still and suffer no discontent

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Nobody needs a ruler to learn to walk, yet the speaker of Dave Bonta's "Learning curve" seems to think otherwise. In six short lines the poem stages a small comedy of theory against experience, then lets experience win, with a bump.

The title borrows a familiar idiom for the way skill grows with practice, usually pictured as a smooth line on a graph. The first stanza starts out as if it will honour that tidy picture: "after measuring / all inches in a foot / I learn to walk." The pun is quiet but effective, since a foot is both a unit of length and the thing we walk on. The word "all" is where the humour sits. It suggests a speaker who believes every one of the twelve inches must be accounted for before a first step is allowed. There is a second reading, though. "Inches" also hints at how walking really happens, a little at a time, so the measuring and the walking may be the same activity seen from two sides. The deadpan tone makes both readings possible, because nothing in the lines tells us whether the speaker is being earnest or sly.

The second stanza shows what the first one left out. "My appointment with the door" is a collision dressed up as a diary entry. The phrase is formal, almost medical or bureaucratic, as though the door were someone with whom business had been scheduled and politely conducted. The door also does what the ruler could not. It teaches through the body, and it does so abruptly. The speaker's response is the most interesting move in the poem: "I stand still and suffer / no discontent." Having just learned to walk, the speaker stops. The learning curve, which should climb, flattens into stillness.

The final two lines are built around a line break that changes their meaning. At the end of "suffer" we expect pain, and the next line removes it. "No discontent" can mean that the speaker feels no unhappiness at all. It can also draw on the older sense of "suffer" as "tolerate," so that the speaker refuses to put up with discontent. The phrasing is also careful. The speaker doesn't announce happiness but reports the absence of unhappiness, a double negative that sounds like a shrug. After the bruise, that calm is more believable than a triumphant lesson would be.

The poem's form supports this tone. It consists of two tercets with no rhyme, no punctuation and no capital letters, so nothing marks the collision with any drama. The stanzas are parallel, each opening with "after" and each followed by an "I" who responds. The repeated "after" makes the poem read like a sequence of causes, even though the causes are absurd. The rhythm shortens in the first stanza, from the brisk "after measuring" down to the plain "I learn to walk," which lands like a step. In the second stanza the middle line slows with its soft s-sounds ("stand still and suffer"), and then the clipped last line stops short. There is no true rhyme, but "appointment" and "discontent" share the same ending sound, a faint chime that frames the stanza without sounding like a rhyme scheme.

The poem's significance lies in how much it does with so little. It takes a phrase that usually describes smooth improvement and shows learning as lumpy, physical and slightly funny. It also asks what counts as knowing something. Measurement gives us numbers, but the door gives us the lesson. Most of all, it suggests that the end of learning is not mastery but a kind of equanimity: standing still, a little sore, and content enough to leave it unremarked. The poem takes only seconds to read, but it leaves the reader to decide whether the speaker is wise or simply unbothered.

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