Face to face — Poem analysis

Dave BontaRomantic

looks hide the whole face but in bed we could see

and all night a cold wind blowing through the windows

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Most of us know the difference between a face and a look. A look is something a face does on purpose: the polite smile, the narrowed eyes, the expression arranged for company. Dave Bonta's four-line "Face to face" begins with that distinction and turns it into a paradox: "looks hide the whole face." The very things a face does to present itself are what keep the rest of it out of sight. The word "whole" matters. In daylight we see faces constantly, but what we miss is the face behind the performance, complete and unguarded.

The second line brings the turn: "but in bed we could see." The sentence never says what we could see, and that missing object is the poem's quiet trick. The obvious answer is each other, but "see" also stretches toward understanding. The verb is also "could," not "see" or "saw." It might be a possibility, a memory, or something bed merely allows. The poem won't say whether this clear sight is happening now or is only imagined. The title helps here. "Face to face" usually means a direct, even confrontational meeting, yet here it recovers its literal sense: two people lying turned toward each other. The idiom promises honesty, and the poem suggests that honesty only arrives once the daytime looks are gone.

Then the poem changes direction: "and all night a cold wind / blowing through the windows." The connecting word is "and," not "but" or "so," so the wind is simply added, with no explanation. There is no main verb either. "Blowing" is a participle, so the sentence never completes its action. The wind just goes on, which fits "all night." Whether this image is threatening or comforting is left to the reader. The cold could be a chill over the closeness, a sign that the intimacy is exposed and the house, or the relationship, is drafty. It could also be the opposite: cold air makes warmth sharper, and it gives two people a reason to lie close enough to see each other's faces. The plural "windows" suggests a place with many openings. Since windows are an old figure for eyes, a reader might also hear an echo of the first couplet: nothing is shut, and everything passes through. That is an inference from the imagery, not something the poem states.

The construction is as bare as the faces it describes. There is no punctuation and no capital letter, so the poem never reaches a full stop and ends in mid-flow on "windows," like the wind it describes. There is no rhyme, but sound still binds the lines. The long "o" runs through "whole," "cold," "blowing" and "windows," an open vowel that seems to carry air through the poem. "Wind" and "windows" repeat the same opening sound, and "hide" and "night" quietly echo each other. The lines are short, five or six syllables each, and they fall into two balanced couplets: one about seeing, one about weather.

One detail is easy to miss. Every word in the first couplet is a single syllable, "looks hide the whole face / but in bed we could see," which gives it a plain, clipped, almost spoken feel. The only words in the whole poem with two syllables are "blowing" and "windows," both in the wind's couplet. The language lengthens and softens exactly where the air starts moving, so the sound enacts the image.

What makes the poem worth reading is how much it holds in about twenty words. It moves from an abstract claim to a physical scene without commentary, and it declines to settle whether being fully seen is a comfort or an exposure. The warmth of seeing and the cold of the wind sit side by side, joined only by "and." The poem leaves us in that unresolved space, listening to a draft that keeps blowing through the open windows.

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