Scarecrow & Farmer — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

Right at dusk, as always, I overhear myself: a drone note audible in the lull between shifts of crickets.

Darkness rises from the ground between the corn stalks, which are anything but still. I step deliberately, one season

on each foot. Today left a crust of salt around my collar, lifted now by a passing breath of wings. I don’t look up.

Four quick cries & a pause, then two more: Estiquirín. The hoe handle digs a furrow in my shoulder

while above me, outlined against the stars, the one wearing my old clothes shivers under his straw, his cross of sticks.

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At dusk, a farmer walks through his cornfield and hears himself as if from outside, a low hum under the sound of crickets. The title pairs "Scarecrow" and "Farmer," and the poem slowly blurs the two. The farmer moves stiffly, "one season on each foot," as though his whole working life is packed into every step. His collar is crusted with the day's salt, and the hoe digs into his shoulder. He is tired, and he carries that tiredness in his body.

Above him, a bird calls out and wings brush past, but he doesn't look up. In the last stanza, the scarecrow stands against the stars wearing the farmer's old clothes, shivering under its straw. The image suggests the farmer sees a worn-out version of himself there, or a past self left standing watch.

The mood is quiet, dim and a little eerie, but not hostile. It feels like the calm, lonely end of a long day of labor, with a faint sadness about time passing.

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